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He guys, can I get your opinion of a business website I just built; Here is the original one the customer has: The Water ClinicHere is the one I built: The Water Clinic New SiteIt has not gone live yet, so it requires the password "clear" to view it.
Last edited by Derrick; 02/12/19 11:30 AM.
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Visit Atcom to get started with your new business VoIP phone system ASAP
Turn up is quick, painless, and can often be done same day.
Let us show you how to do VoIP right, resulting in crystal clear call quality and easy-to-use features that make everyone happy!
Proudly serving Canada from coast to coast.
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On the Contact page (and others) the letter f links to Facebook, however the image f appears as a random letter, perhap change it to a Facebook button? I like the white backgroud as it leans to the image of something pure as opposed to pages with a light yellow background Ewe, is that toilet water! The image on the Review page (the review itself) really takes away from the thought of clean and pure. The image background looks like grey water and the typescript looks clogged. Rather than the actual letter perhaps use the actual veribage but on a white background with clean typescript with a black square to similate a letter?
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The review letter, I agree
I will either OCR it or just type it myself, its from a bad looking pdf file. I also don't like the default facebook button, so I will change that as well.
Thanks Dean.
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Just here to criticize...er, I mean help.
Nice job. I quickly checked most of the links and spelling but only casually. Much better than the original site.
I forgot to ask...Are they no longer interested in Angie's List?
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They didn't mention it, and that button is there to leave a review I guess, not read them. I was advised by an expert to not allow any comments by customers on the new site, just asking for more trouble than good. If they want to say something go to the contact page or make a phone call.
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I agree. If someone want to leave a review make 'em work for it.
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I retyped the review letter, and fleshed out the Facebook F, as well as a couple of other things. Follow up critique is most welcome!
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Image of Rottten Egg Smell...difficult reading the word "water" is it possible to shift the image to prevent black type on black background or change the image to color and use a light yellow...as in the color of rotten egg yoke?
It's a petty issue I know.
I can check the pages out this evening if you want more nit-picking.
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With the buttons - Request a free quote
- Facebook
- My account
you have the 'Request' and 'My Account' with blue buttons but Facebook as a white f in a black box. Wouldn't using this icon better match your existing theme?
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It would, and I might try to use it. Squarespace auto links their websites to a Facebook business page, and sticks that F on the footer with some choices as to how it looks, but no colors. Not that I can find anyway. I gave the rotten egg picture a bit of a yellow tint.
I found the option to round the button or square it and make it "normal" color. I added a picture of their top of the line water softening system as well, too fill a hole on a page.
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